Christmas Story: stuff legends are made of

Black Bough Poetry Submission 
2. The Troubadour’s Song

Emmanuel is born
to the Father's delight.
Israel’s long-awaited hope.
The Word sang a pure melody.

It was a soft, melodious tune
for those with hearts to hear.
Its whispered melody arrived as soft as
the tiny beats of a hummingbird’s wing.

The dawn of a new beginning
altered our precepts, arousing a
sanguine hope in a songless world.

The morning light hummed
as angels sang the Troubadour’s song
of man's redemptive story.

Haiku version

Anticipation,
to the Father's delight,
Emmanuel is born

The dawning light
of a new beginning
slates our thirst.

Arousing
a sanguine hope
for the coming year.

A salubrious optimism
laced with intent,
tempered.

12/13/2024- Long Distance Christmas

6 Comments

  1. Beth Reavis's avatar Beth Reavis says:

    Oh my. Beautiful poetry! Thank you for sharing.

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  2. aschmeisser's avatar aschmeisser says:

    You had me at ‘hummingbird’s wing’,

    but not in the best way,

    because I then recalled, first thing,

    that wild and wooly day

    when a hummingbird did spy

    me outside, and did what I feared.

    Going beak-first for my eye,

    he got tangled in my beard,

    and not achieving the intended,

    with his plans frankly a wreck,

    went ahead and madly vented

    his frustration on my neck,

    so please allow that I might carp…

    his beak was really , really sharp!

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  3. dawnfanshawe's avatar dawnfanshawe says:

    lovely fresh poem

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  4. annadamswriter's avatar annadamswriter says:

    Beautiful so full of vivid images and emotions! My twentysomething son still lives at home but, I know that one day I’ll be like you, decorating my tree and hoping for surprise visits from family! God Bless!

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