A Pastoral Cacophony

November 2022
Vol VII No IV
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A Pastoral Cacophony

As morning's first blush slips through the mizzling mist, dawn's chorus begins. The woodland world wakes, nestlings fluff their feathers, squish together and listen to their twitter song.

Blackbirds sing a low mellow tone blending choral notes to a day-spring chant. Red-breasted robins' antiphonal tweets, twitters back and forth.

A cool zephyr breezes through the budding trees, and a hermit thrush adds a rhythmic woodwind harmony. Chee-pippety-chee-chee, Jenny wren joins in with a light peppy lilt, stepping up the beat.

Colorful warblers echo a descant as tiny rainbows shimmer in the twilight's dew. A Capella chorus in one voice, sings a spring aria.

Songbirds greet the morning with a pastoral cacophony.

"siiih "siiih" "chink chink chink. Suddenly, the tempo changes and the chorus fades. A mockingbird's catcall signals a tail twitching taunt, kitty in the weeds.

The aria ends with the soft adagio from a mourning dove.
coo-ah coo-AH, Coo-OO-oo coo-coo-coo.

Antiphon: alternate singing by two groups.
Adagio: A tempo having slow movement; restful at ease.
Lilt: a pleasant gentle swinging rhythm, a characteristic rising and falling in the tune.
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A Haiku: Spring's Aria

Morning's first blush slips through the mizzling mist,
dawn's chorus begins.

Antiphonal tweets, robins, warblers, blackbirds sing
day-spring's symphony.

The woodland world wakes, feathers fluffed, nestlings listen,
to their someday song.

Blending choral notes, blackbirds add a mellow tone
to twilight's day-song.

Chee-pippety-chee, chee-chee,
Jenny wren joins in with a peppy lilt.

A rainbow shimmers in the morning dew,
colorful warblers echo a descant.

An Acappella chorus singing a spring aria,
songbirds unite.

“siiih, siiih" “chink chink chink,"
a sudden signature change, the sunrise song fades.

A blue jay's catcall signals a tail twitching taunt,
kitty in the weeds.

The aria ends with the soft adagio
from a mourning dove.

perch-coo, coo-COO-coo,
coo-ah, coo-coo-coo,
Antiphon: alternate singing by two groups. 
Adagio: A tempo having slow movement; restful at ease.
Lilt: a pleasant gentle swinging rhythm, a characteristic rising and falling in the tune. 
kitty in the weeds
bluejay's catcall
a tail twitching taunt
#HaikuSeed taunt
warblers' echo
shimmering in the mist,
morning descant

ending with a soft
adagio of a mourning dove,
coo-Coo-coo, coo-ah, coo-coo-coo

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Explore the Fact that Hell is for REAL

Explore Grace. 
Ephesians 2:8-9
8 For it is by grace you have been saved, through faith—and this is not from yourselves, it is the gift of God— 9 not by works, so that no one can boast.

A gift freely bestowed to all who accept.
Heavenly Destination
Gift of the Holy Spirit
Knowing our Heavenly Father (so much to say here)

Explore the path of rejection
1 Corinthians 2:14 
The natural person does not accept the things of the Spirit of God, for they are folly to him, and he is not able to understand them because they are spiritually discerned.

2 Tim 4:3
For the time will come when they will not endure sound doctrine; but having itching ears, they shall heap to themselves teachers in accordance with their own lusts.

Explore the only path for salvation
John 1:14 
And the Word became flesh and dwelt among us, and we have seen his glory, glory as of the only Son from the Father, full of grace 
Acts 26:18
To open their eyes, so that they may turn from darkness to light and from the power of Satan to God, that they may receive forgiveness of sins and a place among those who are sanctified by faith in
2 Corinthians 3:16 
But when one turns to the Lord, the veil is removed.

Explore the fact that Hell is for real. 
Jesus' favorite name for himself was the Son of Man because He, the eternal, infinite, chose to become finite for a little while. 

People see God's grace every day in His creation. They are awed but they have a veil over their hearts. 
This is what we see here on earth through a veil:

Life and Death
Light and Darkness
Love and Dementia

Now Imagine a place where there is no life, only death and eternal separation from God. Darkness fills the mind with no understanding of your existence or meaning and love is replaced with dementia.

Hell is very real and just like we see glimpses of heaven, we also see the horrors of hell. 

Ignorance is bliss until it bites you in the butt. How can we let our friends, family, neighbors go to hell in ignorance? 

Everyday God reveals His Glory, His Magnitude, His Wonder, so we are without excuse. It is true that pride and arrogance go before the fall; but it does not have to be our pride that keeps us from sharing the gospel. 


NOW:
Let us pray and EXPLORE ways to expose deception wisely in love with one word, one thought, that turns the heart back to Jesus. 
WE must speak the whole truth in love. 
Explore ways to tell God's Truth to your friends/family who delude themselves. 
Speak from love and wisdom with the Holy Spirit as your prompt. 
This was not what I first was writing about. I was making a bucket list. My pastor as of late (I mean more so), has a real concern for the lost and those who are under strong deceptions. 
by RL Brown

March / Haiku and more/ By RL Brown

Moons of March

Sky looks down on earth
with the dark eye of a new moon,
spring winks at the stars. 

Seeds shed winter's shield
roots stretch in fertile dirt-
March howls for spring's warmth.

Loam stirs, breaking free-
muddling nightcrawlers rise
under the worm moon. 

Foretoken of spring
Marsh marigolds in damp fields
Hoverflies delight

Terrestrial tides collide 
rising high, but twice a year.
sun and moon poised.

A morrowless day
arriving on the equinox
perfectly balanced. 

Sugar Moon shines down-
sweet maples release sap
as March winds breathe change. 
Photo by Kieren Ridley on Pexels.com
Sugar Moon shines down-
sweet maples release sap
as March winds breathe change. #haikusaturday
Bordering Mamaw’s cotton field
Besides Mamma's fence
To my backyard
Daffodils.
#HaikuSaturday 
repost from #haikuseed
Longing for a sidewalk stroll
along the storefronts of a –
five-and-dime
boutique
coffee house
with friends
 . . .mask less.
Misty moisty mizzling
Wintry winds whistling
Slinging sleet. #HaikuSaturday

https://brontebrown2.com/2022/03/12/march-2022-submission-trouvaille-review/

April/ Haiku/ ETC by RL Brown

War Is a Kigo https://haikuseed.com/war-is-a-kigo/ via 
@HaikuSeed_
 
The Afghan thirteen
fallen, betrayed, left behind-
death's grim triumph.
Spring

Slipping through
the morning's dew
sunlight cracks the dawn

chee-pippety-chee
songbirds greet morning’s first light with an
arias of praise

kitty's in the weeds
a blue jay’s catcall-warning,
a tail twitching taunt

cool zephyr breeze
flows over tender grasses
goose pimples giggle.

a rye bluegrass mix,
tickles bare feet,
soothing the soul
doubly comfy, Ahhh- (45)

rudbeckia titters
roots stretch in fertile earth.
polllinizers play.

dainty wings unfurled,
Diana Fritillary-
dances atop blooms.

deep within earth's roots
generational stories
interwine

hurricane prelude
whirlybirds in the wind
bliss ignorance

wrapped by clouded storms,
dark tornados
sounds of March winds.


rudbeckia titters 
roots stretching in fecund dirt,
pollinizers play.  revision for haiku dialogue

dainty wings unfurled,
Diana Fritillary-
dances atop blooms.

submissions Haiku Dialogue/Troutswirl
Dark Tornados
Wrapped in clouded storms, blinding,
Sounds of a freight train. 
April 11, 2022
kitty in the weeds
bluejay's catcall
a tail twitching taunt #HaikuSeed taunt
Cool zephyr breeze
over tender grasses 
stuck between the toes
goose pimples giggle. 
Photo by RL Brown
Dainty wings unfurled,
Diana Fritillary-
dances atop blooms.  #haikuseed butterfly
Picturesque shapes
lurking among cracked shadows-
craggy contours
#HaikuSeed cracked
Shoulder surgery-
torrents of pain downpour,
to a clench stillness. 
OUCH! #HaikuSeed downpour
My thoughts trail behind
as I pass through the doorway,
forgotten.  #HaikuSeed
Deep within my roots,
generational stories
intertwined.
 #HaikuSaturday #haiku #haikuseed
Mississippi Oak on the coast.

Morning Coffee

Coffee (or tea) can mean something different to each person. For some people, it is the aroma that wakens the morning senses; for others, it is downing the first cup that kick starts the day. For others, coffee is the elixir necessary for clarity of vision. without it, the newspaper would be useless. With all its sensual clues, one still has to acclimate to coffee’s bitter taste. But once you find the right blend, coffee is your friend.

Morning coffee is a bit like life with all the sweet, savory, bitter, sour bits, and yet when blended with the perfect pairing, satisfying. (Coffee and a donut)

Time to tie that morning coffee with awakening to God. Life is full of flavor, emotion, sight, sound, and meaning. Walking with God in the light of His Word brings a perfect pairing to healing old wounds, finding a grateful attitude, a sense of worth, and blessings during trials. Bitterness, saucy tongues, doubt, and more will be a part of this life but God’s Word is the perfect pairing to counter life’s bitterness.

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Spring Showers

Spring sings,
“Birds, sing your morning song.
Praising Him to whom we belong.
Wind, blow the seeds.
Loam, provide their needs.
Clouds water the flowers.
It’s time for God’s showers.”

We sing the Singer’s gospel message, praising the one who saved us. Holy Spirit is our guide to plant the gospel message in another’s heart. God waters and causes the seed to grow. Spring calls us to sing His gospel message.

I moved my younger brother into a nursing home. He is my brother, but the burden was heavy. It made my heart sad. Yet, he had a remarkable recovery from the time he entered till I left.

The word the last week was easy. It was not easy to pack up his belongings, clean out his home, essentially his life, and store them. Yet, it reminded me not to put store in the things of this world.

We let temporal things measure the sum of our lives. Yet, the sum of how we live has an eternal value.

Spring Sings! By RL Brown

Spring Fling Contest 2022/ revised for another submission

    Winter howls at Spring like a middle schooler's biological clock clanks.      
"It's too early," Winter yawns.
"Autumn has arrived in the southern hemisphere," says Spring.
"Not yet." Winter flops back, adding another blanket of snow.
"The Cold Moon will be full soon," says Spring, offering Winter an enticement.
Spring knows Winter loves to hang out with Cold Moon on the longest night of the inverted season.
"Okay, I'm up." Winter sits very still, blowing another chilly breeze.
"Come along," says Blizzard. Winter stands and stretches.
"I see you've been at work. It's a resplendent day in pastel hues," Winter says to Spring.
"Thank you, Winter." Winter bows, whispering, "See you next year."
Spring smiles, turning to the Sun, "It's time to melt the crusty earth and direct your rays to tickle the fertile dirt."
"As you wish," replies Sun.
Zephyr carries the seeds. 
Loam provides for their needs.
Clouds water fertile dirt.
Bouquets rise from the Earth.
https://giphy.com/gifs/flower-rain-spring-QunbrgyjvLJblE8OcM

11 responses to “Spring Sings! By RL Brown”

  1. katiefischerwrites Avatar

    I like how you had winter and spring talking with each other, it’s so true how it feels like it flip flops between the two in early spring.

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  2. Molly Ippolito Avatar

    So different and unique! Good luck to you!

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  3. brontebrown2 Avatar

    Thank you, and good luck to you also!

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    kathalsey

    A word dance as per your usual poetic work, Very original POV.

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    1. brontebrown2 Avatar

      Thanks for the encouragement-

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  5. seschipper Avatar

    Nice job! 🙂

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    Deborah Williams

    Fun way to show the transition of the seasons! Great job!

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    chardixon47

    Love the personification of the two seasons. So poetic and playful! Well done!

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The Hummingbird

Trouvaille Review, March 23, 2022 Publication 

The Hummingbird

Swiftest things that run the world,
Hums and beats, their wings unfurled.
Hummingbirds need constant fuel.
Brilliant blooms attract this jewel.
Forward, backward, upside down.
These dashing (feisty) fliers zip around.
 
Golden flowers brilliant blooms
Entice birds with shiny plumes.
Blazing Star to Geranium,
Coral Bells to Delphinium.
Flower meadows, patchwork plots,
Scattered seeds in local lots. 

Ode to Childhood

Hopscotch with seas shells 
and whirlybirds in the air,
singing weeee and swinging high
swing high, flying free,
landing barfoot in the grass

Cousins taking turns
Counting to one hundred
hands in sync,
switching without missing a beat
the ice cream maker's hand-crank
keeps churing.

Walking with cousins
Playing with friends,
hoping summer will never end.

No school, outside and free,
it is time just to be me.
Gliding on the porch swing, a bowl in my lap
shelling peas with purple fingers-
I prefer to snap green beans, please.

Straight from the garden, a summer snack.
Chores done, potatoes stored in the shack.
Childhood summers make me wish for more,
tree climbing, river-side camping
on a sandy shore
and so much more.
METADATA-START

The Afghan Thirteen by RL Brown

The Afghan Thirteen by RL Brown 

The pulse is weak,
a vanishing vapor
,
Thanatos grins when
breathing ceased.


Death's grim triumph-
of the Afghan thirteen,
fallen, betrayed,

left behind.

A country's demise
by the hands of a few
won't be forgotten.

America's heart bleeds.

Hope hurts and hope heals,
shattering the grip of hate-
past and present repeat.
(1776)